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no-one-special

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Re: here goes
« Reply #15 on: January 23, 2012, 09:05:56 AM »
if  you could cover you life
with a blanket of snow
what words would you write to be seen ?

If you could dissolve you life
in a torrent of rain
would you swim for for the sure to be saved ?

If you could clear you life
with a tornado ,a storm
would you cling on  or just  let go ?

When the darkness falls
and the light is all gone
are you alone afraid on the floor ?

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Re: here goes
« Reply #16 on: January 23, 2012, 03:06:11 PM »
Quote from: no-one-special on January 23, 2012, 09:05:56 AM

When the darkness falls
and the light is all gone
are you alone afraid on the floor ?



Yes.

I definetly - as I'm sure most people with depression find - feel that as soon as everything stops, as soon as I get into bed, the lights go off and its quiet I'm very scared - theres nothing to hide it or to mask it - its me and my thoughts, thats it.

You are very talented. Please keep writing

xx
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Re: here goes
« Reply #17 on: January 23, 2012, 07:04:33 PM »
Quote from: Munchroom on January 23, 2012, 03:06:11 PM
Quote from: no-one-special on January 23, 2012, 09:05:56 AM

When the darkness falls
and the light is all gone
are you alone afraid on the floor ?



Yes.

I definetly - as I'm sure most people with depression find - feel that as soon as everything stops, as soon as I get into bed, the lights go off and its quiet I'm very scared - theres nothing to hide it or to mask it - its me and my thoughts, thats it.

You are very talented. Please keep writing

xx

I am not talented but thank you that means a lot. The words are just there and they come tumbling out. It is really cathartic &*(
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Re: here goes
« Reply #18 on: January 24, 2012, 11:45:50 PM »
When I can't do right for doing wrong
When my fear prevents me moving on
When I worry for others more than you'll ever know
when  words hurt more than I can show

Thats when I need your understanding most
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Re: here goes
« Reply #19 on: January 25, 2012, 09:10:37 AM »
That was very moving.

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Re: here goes
« Reply #20 on: January 25, 2012, 10:06:47 PM »
Sadness is a lover
whos hands will not let go
longing for the happiness
that once i use to know

I revisit all my mistakes
my ifs and what should be
I wish I could erase them
but they are what makes me ME
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Re: here goes
« Reply #21 on: January 27, 2012, 12:06:53 AM »
I sit alone
The clock ticks
the wind blows
The clock ticks
the night falls
The clock ticks
Dawn breaks
The clock ticks
I go
The clock......
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Re: here goes
« Reply #22 on: February 02, 2012, 07:14:11 PM »
WOW i wish i could write like u
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Re: here goes
« Reply #23 on: March 03, 2012, 10:01:11 PM »
I love you
I can feel you near
I need you
I want you here

I will protect you
Keep the darkness away
I will hold you
If you want me to stay

But I need space
a time to mend
I need help
I fear I am near the end

But I will be true
I will be here for you
and even when I am gone
My love for you is always strong
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Re: here goes
« Reply #24 on: March 04, 2012, 06:15:19 AM »
Thats good :)
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Re: here goes
« Reply #25 on: March 04, 2012, 03:08:34 PM »
Thats lovely  :).

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Re: here goes
« Reply #26 on: March 10, 2012, 07:36:02 PM »
Something is wrong ,nothing feels right, I am crying for others,but not for life
I  am fearing  the dark corners that live in my mind
I have nothing to offer ,nothing but time

I cant see the sun, I can see only cloud
I can feel the rain ,Its pouring on down
I see the puddles are my tears,  and my life is the ground.
They form and they go and nothing is found
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Re: here goes
« Reply #27 on: March 10, 2012, 07:41:56 PM »
Lovely again  :).

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Re: here goes
« Reply #28 on: March 10, 2012, 07:50:47 PM »
You really are very good xx
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Re: here goes
« Reply #29 on: March 21, 2012, 12:19:59 AM »
I thought things were getting better
thoughts were clearer in my mind

I hoped things were improving
getting better over time

Then I asked for help and found
the was none when I looked around

Why open up just to be let down ?
Why open up to rejection ?

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